October 28th, 2005
Defeat of Desire
Lying on the ground was his dead body.
In his pocket a suicide note was found.
“I died a dozen times last night,
One twenty times today.
To stop this death I kill myself,
There is no other way.
I’ll take some twenty sleeping pills.
And tie my head in plastic bag.
I’ll numb my wrists with frozen water,
And slash them with a knife.
I’ll die for love I found and lost,
I’ll die for life is death.”
His suicide was reported on national TV,
The suicide note was read aloud.
Her TV was not working that day,
Or she had gone to shop.
She was sleeping at that time,
Or she was taking bath.
-Kunal Goel
Tags: Poetry, Desire, Love, Schizophrenia, Suicide, Death
Kunal Goel says:
The third and fourth line indicate Schizophrenia.
October 28th, 2005 at 02:14 pm
sona says:
very touching.keep it up!!!
October 28th, 2005 at 10:02 pm
Kunal Goel says:
thx
October 28th, 2005 at 10:49 pm
twinkle says:
omg!.. i love it!
October 29th, 2005 at 10:09 am
Ravi says:
Dear Kunal!
i enjoy every thing that you write but this poem has a special place in my heart.
its really good.
let me share a sher with you which has similar meaning.
“mit gaye jinke liye naam tak unka naa liya
kaash is baat ki unko khabar ho jaati”
keep it up!
good luck
October 29th, 2005 at 01:38 pm
Kunal Goel says:
Wow Ravi Great Sher! Thanks
October 29th, 2005 at 03:34 pm
Z says:
Intorduced! on BlogIntro.com
October 29th, 2005 at 08:53 pm
Kunal Goel says:
ya thx
October 29th, 2005 at 10:49 pm
powdermonkey says:
Good one Kunal!
October 30th, 2005 at 12:28 am
Kunal Goel says:
October 30th, 2005 at 12:30 am
Richa says:
October 31st, 2005 at 03:59 pm
Enjoi35 says:
Nice job on this poem!
I liked the flow and how you told it, keep up the good work.
November 5th, 2005 at 02:38 am
Neha M says:
Brilliant. Just brilliant. Suicide plays quite a part in most of my stories too.
November 30th, 2005 at 09:03 pm
DeEp says:
heya , u ppl r wierd ! u kill ppl in ur stories !
January 19th, 2006 at 12:15 am