mere bhitar ki

mere bhitar ki trishna ko tum miljulkar door karo,
khwab jo maine dekhe they wo mujhse milkar poor karo

yeh baat nai wo baat sahi, kya lena par in baaton ka,
akash yadi hai gyat mujhe, akash se lekar door chalo

beete baaton ke saye jo unki yaad dilate hain,
unko jo kabhi na bhool sake to unko bhi barbad karo

teevrgativikritpratidinmeraman tumse milkar hota hai,
apne seene ki dhadkan ko mujhse milkar vyapt karo

kal raat jo tumne sochi thi wo baat jo mujhse kehne ki,
wo baat kabhi bhi keh na sake tum, us baat ko antarlaap karo

ek prani ke do pehlu hain jo jeevanbhar sang rehte hain,
ek tumko pyara lagta hai, tum duje ko swikar karo

main apne aap ke bheetar hoon tum apne andar rehti ho,
is band kamre ke jeevan ko mujhse milkar azad karo

-Kunal Goel

9 comments

1. Ishan Dubey says:

   Kamaal hai!

   December 17th, 2007 at 01:21 am

2. Ishan Dubey says:

   “is band kamre ke jeevan ko mujhse milkar azad karo”

   Umda!

   December 17th, 2007 at 01:21 am

3. anirudh says:

   acchi hai kunal…itni hindi aati nahi mujhe..par jitni samajh aayi wo acchi lagi

   December 17th, 2007 at 10:17 am

4. Kunal Goel says:

   lol

   December 17th, 2007 at 01:14 pm

5. Whatever says:

   This is good.

   December 22nd, 2007 at 11:02 am

6. Kunal Goel says:

   thanks whatever, this helps.

   December 23rd, 2007 at 10:25 am

7. Sarika says:

   Not bad

   December 24th, 2007 at 12:41 pm

8. Satish says:

   Amazing… very good… you are very talented!!!

   March 18th, 2008 at 05:19 pm

9. Kunal Goel says:

   Thanks satish, your comment will keep me going.

   March 21st, 2008 at 07:07 pm

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