I left you

i left you today when
you didnt pick up the phone.
last night when you didnt kiss
me and two weeks back
when my friends came home
and you were sleeping.

-Kunal Goel

10 comments

1. Anusha says:

   Where there is great love, there are always wishes.
   Willa Cather

   November 21st, 2006 at 05:32 pm

2. Deepak says:

   Senseless post, why would you leave you wife for such silly reasons?

   November 26th, 2006 at 04:15 pm

3. M says:

   That’s a profound poem. Sat in my heart with a thud.

   November 30th, 2006 at 11:24 am

4. Kunal Goel says:

   thanks

   November 30th, 2006 at 11:42 am

5. Aaadietya says:

   

   Well penned

   December 13th, 2006 at 03:53 am

6. Deepak says:

   urrrggghhh

   December 22nd, 2006 at 10:22 am

7. shweta says:

   Liked it!

   December 29th, 2006 at 01:24 pm

8. Sarika says:

   Well written!

   December 24th, 2007 at 12:47 pm

9. Kunal Goel says:

   thanks sarika

   December 26th, 2007 at 12:52 am

10. lonely stranger says:

    when you leave someone
    there is no forgiveness
    only denail
    only pain
    the words ‘missing you’ start to have a whole new meaning
    you think about the person more than anything in the world
    you try to be happy,
    try to find reason
    but leaving someone is never easy
    there a memories that once mad you happy
    now they make you cry

    …………..leave or live……………………………………………………..

    March 18th, 2008 at 12:05 pm

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