November 7th, 2006
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Well, I didn’t quite know the Hindi category existed here…since I’ve discovered it, I thought I may post in my amateur attempt at shairi…
I’ve written a few, like beginners work, but my command over the Urdu language isn’t strong enough to write Ghalib style…
Bear with it, if you don’t like it…
Is veerane dasht mein kho kar paya kisi ne kuch nahi
Aaye the toofan dhundne jalti huwi ret mein
Lekin kisi mein woh baat na thi tum jaisi
Ek tumhi the jiske bharose mein bhikr tou sakti.
I admit I am hesitant…
-Sheikha.
baba says:
its nice:) keep on going
November 7th, 2006 at 06:33 pm
D'puk says:
Whats the meaning of ‘Dhast’??? And btw hi guys, how’re you all??
November 8th, 2006 at 09:21 am
D'puk says:
“Meri zindagi khushi ki ek leher hai, yeh veerana toh mehez ek ittefaq hai”
- D’puk
November 8th, 2006 at 09:33 am
Sheikha says:
dasht means desert in urdu…
November 8th, 2006 at 01:56 pm
Sheikha says:
I have one on ittefaq too:
Jab ke khatm hogaye hain sab rishte,
Har ittefaq par kyun ummeed tehrai hai?
Likha kya hai akhir naseeb mein hamare
Jab jurr nahi sakte har dafa takrate kyun hain?
I like yours better D’puk…
November 8th, 2006 at 01:57 pm
D'puk says:
You like mine better?? I didn’t even intend to write it, yeh to aise hi likh diya by getting inspired from ur’s!!!
I dont know a shit about poetry.
November 9th, 2006 at 09:38 am
D'puk says:
By the way, hi! I m Deepak.
November 9th, 2006 at 09:39 am
Sheikha says:
I figured…
I’m Sheikha.
As for the poetry bit, that was a well written verse for someone who doesn’t know anything about poetry…perhaps, I should inspire you more
PS: Most of the best written poetry is always unintentional.
November 9th, 2006 at 01:25 pm
Isaiah says:
Hmm…
November 9th, 2006 at 10:17 pm
D'puk says:
Ab Ishan yaar tennu yeh “hmm..” comment karne ki kya zaroorat thi?? hai kya yeh?
November 10th, 2006 at 09:22 am