June 16th, 2006
A poem in form of a song in form of a screenplay
Instructions
Play “why does it always have to rain on me?” By Travis
Turn the lights off
Open eyes
Side of her bed- Violin plays
Close-up of eyes
Her eyes sparkle
I am hugging her
Kissing the nape of her neck
I can’t sleep tonight
Why does have to always rain on me
It’s raining on the insides of her room
I fell in love with you when I was 17
Everybody is saying
But I can’t close my eyes
Her picture
Water is pouring on it
I can’t stand myself
Alone
All these days
Smiling
I lied to you when I was 17
You were the most beautiful of creature
I can’t sleep tonite
Because
You’re still so beautiful
Only to me
I can’t avoid your lightning
Why do you only rain on me?
-Ali Sultan
Neha says:
Nice…I particularly like the last line. it says so many things…
July 12th, 2006 at 04:14 pm
baba says:
this one was for you:)
July 13th, 2006 at 10:37 pm