May 23rd, 2006
Burning Bright…
He looked at me,
in our intimate moment
Smiled
And showed me his skin
At the places where it was burnt.
He asked me to pass
Through him,
Like water
on his burnt flesh.
I cried.
To see him in pain
Was unbearable.
he wanted me to pass.
To soothe his
Scalded flesh.
I smiled then.
And I burnt him.
- Neha
Dolphin says:
i can’t figure out it’s meaning
May 24th, 2006 at 05:35 pm
anirudh says:
poem..?
May 24th, 2006 at 10:19 pm
Kunal Goel says:
tiger tiger burning bright
May 25th, 2006 at 01:25 pm
Ij says:
Dark
May 26th, 2006 at 03:52 am
Neha says:
hey IJ, thanks for dropping by… these verses are something i wrote for someone i hurt… unintentionally though… when he reads, he’ll know im talking of him.
May 26th, 2006 at 07:33 pm
baba says:
thank o
May 27th, 2006 at 04:53 pm
baba says:
i never did hurt me idiot:)
May 27th, 2006 at 05:57 pm
Neha says:
ha! u? who was talking abt u?
May 28th, 2006 at 07:39 pm
Abhishek says:
isi tarah apne dil ki baatein share kiya karo, dil ka bojh halka ho jata hai..
May 30th, 2006 at 12:08 am