Comments on: Incomplete Poem

By: Neha

Neha — Fri, 17 Mar 2006 06:19:27 +0000

I liked this one too Kunal… Makes me sad thoug, i dont know why.

By: Neha M

Neha M — Sun, 04 Dec 2005 14:37:00 +0000

now THIS is brilliant. I liked this one.

By: Koonal

Koonal — Tue, 23 Aug 2005 11:49:08 +0000

Thx Kirti.

By: Kirti

Kirti — Tue, 23 Aug 2005 10:54:26 +0000

very nice poem, u write well!

By: Koonal

Koonal — Mon, 22 Aug 2005 12:59:32 +0000

I wrote this poem in common meter best used by Emily Dickinson.

common meter is a four line stanza, with two pairs of a line of iambic tetrameter followed by a line of iambic trimeter; the rhymes usually fall on the lines of trimeter.

For more info: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Meter_(poetry)

By: Koonal

Koonal — Mon, 22 Aug 2005 12:41:23 +0000

Yes Swati he was english. Thx sona

By: Swati

Swati — Sun, 21 Aug 2005 18:35:59 +0000

A lavish work.The blue-eyed man sounds v English.Was he?

By: sona

sona — Sun, 21 Aug 2005 14:53:52 +0000

its quite nice!!!i didnt expect u to write such a good & neat poem.

By: catherine

catherine — Tue, 16 Aug 2005 16:35:52 +0000

it is beautiful ,, but the lost thirteenth line will keep on haunting in my mind…

By: Fred

Fred — Wed, 09 Feb 2005 03:03:58 +0000

Thanks a lot for the 13th line Rambling Irishman!