consciousness, a stream of
Now she wants me to talk to a friend of hers, no I mean why should I, why is it always me that has to give in, why can’t I refuse, just say no, but silly me I just can’t. I don’t know what happens to me, is it she, or maybe its my own submissive nature; no, it’s just that I want to be so goddamned good that I cannot displease anyone. Oh God! I don’t know what to do, should I go ahead and talk to him. What did she say, he is intelligent and sexy as hell, I mean, since when did these two things started coming in a combo-pack; what did she say, he is a very good writer, maybe he’ll write something about me as well, but, what the heck, who can understand the real me — I hope he is as hairy as daddy, that would be great — I mean who can ever understand that it is so goddamned irritating seeing your room-mates’ panties every morning. I just fail to understand what it is that she has for that silly blue skirt of hers, why can’t she just stop wearing them, as it is they don’t cover up much, and when she is sleeping they really don’t. I think I should meet up her friend, he might be good, he even knows how to play guitar — guitar players have long and supple fingers, I wonder what all he can do with them — and has a bike as well, hey! that’s it, I mean, what more can you ask for. Wait he wears specs as well — so what, daddy also wears them — specs, nah! Its nearly 2:30, I better get some sleep now. Stop thinking — where should we meet, but — stop thinking. Alright. Alright. Stop now. Phew!
-Ishan Dubey
catherine says:
Ishan .. this is simply great.
i ,at times find myself unable to believe that is that same ishan who has written this,, but to my surprise u write so good Goddamn it.
my cellphone is not in use till d time i get my salary … i will call u once would be able to …
but this story is nothin less than a masterpiece…
luv u
August 24th, 2005 at 04:02 pm
kapil vadhera says:
hey! do ya write as well!. i didn’t knew dat dumbos can also write..
gettin bck to da story…..thou it wasn’t dat grt but .hmmmmmmmm…was ok. not bad either!
for a starter, i think this cud be the beginin’ but u need to go places dude….
so keep up da gud work n keep writin’
but plz don’t ask us to read those!
August 25th, 2005 at 10:32 pm
shantanu arora says:
the first seems to be a flatter; the second seems to be better;
third should be a trigger…
let some thing substantial flow from ur pen…then let it be anything…but the past too was gud…
cheers..
keep riting
28th august, 2005,
happy janamashtmi
August 27th, 2005 at 11:22 pm
sapna rana says:
hey………ishan !
how r u ?
nice script ……has an originality.
liked it,has lot of underlying meaning too……..
keep writing……it’s an expression that’s so uncommon.
hope to read some more……………
sapna…..
August 28th, 2005 at 03:29 pm
Koonal says:
go to sleep now, great story.
August 29th, 2005 at 10:38 am
Mukesh Dutt says:
Nice thoughts “guitar players have long and supple fingers, Iwonder what all he can do with them ” keep ur imagination going man another Salman Rushdie dont mind his age just look at his wife .Keep going man u r good at it .
September 16th, 2005 at 10:29 pm
olive says:
lovely
impressive
interesting
touching
lovely
October 12th, 2005 at 11:41 am
Neha says:
Ishan. I take my words back. You are my hero!
November 20th, 2005 at 02:05 am
aditya says:
i agree wid koonal;)
February 20th, 2006 at 11:21 pm
sapna rana says:
hi, wonder how r u doing, i can be contacted at suneel@suhailbahwangroup.com
May 3rd, 2006 at 10:48 pm