March 9th, 2006
A Lover’s Confession
remember the day we did not meet,
or the day we didn’t talk rather
the day when it was not windy
the day it did not rain.
the day when i did not take
my dog out for a walk,
the day you didn’t tell me how
much you love me or
the day you didn’t kiss me when
i came back from the office.
that day I was cheating on you,
i spent it all alone.
-Kunal Goel
mark says:
thats fabulous kunal!! i love it. the last line is perfect.
March 10th, 2006 at 03:35 am
Dolphin says:
Thats a cool one kunal….:mrgreen:
March 10th, 2006 at 07:45 am
Kunal Goel says:
thanks
March 10th, 2006 at 08:14 am
Neha Mujumdar says:
nice. now THIS is a poem that makes sense for a change.
March 10th, 2006 at 04:39 pm
Kunal Goel says:
i wrote it for your sister.
March 10th, 2006 at 06:35 pm
Neha Mujumdar says:
so i deduce.
March 10th, 2006 at 08:49 pm
Freya says:
Sisters can fuel creativity!
Nice one, Koonal.
March 21st, 2006 at 12:10 am
Kunal Goel says:
thanks freya
March 21st, 2006 at 11:44 am
Alisha says:
nice
(maybe i should give you stars instead of writing these words)
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August 5th, 2006 at 02:35 am