March 11th, 2005
My Spring Lover When Do You Come?
My spring lover when do you come?
Since red autumn I’ve missed you
I want to feel the blue-green sea
The blue but greener sea in you
But send, my love, some love to love
With love would you send me some love?
If yes, then pick the leaf that has
The prettiest, fragnant rose above
Then place your some love on it love
And blow it with the wind to me
So, if, my spring love, you won’t come
Assigned to you, a sign to me.
So, springing, love, my life would be
Be you not here or there you be
If not the spring then summer kiss
For I will wait in love for thee!
-by Freya Kulshreshtha
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Isaiah says:
Amazing…makes me want to fall in love…yet again
March 26th, 2005 at 05:22 pm
olive says:
nice rhythm freya, n da feel
October 6th, 2005 at 09:43 am
chetna says:
cool one…
October 25th, 2005 at 08:14 pm
Avantika says:
wow! I thought it was one of those ‘quoted’ poems…but its not…im quite amazed..
November 15th, 2005 at 12:17 am
Neha M says:
how old was she when she wrote this?
December 14th, 2005 at 05:11 pm
Kunal Goel says:
she was 12
December 14th, 2005 at 08:08 pm
Isaiah says:
lol!
December 15th, 2005 at 10:32 am
aditya says:
koonal could you tell me how to post all these things
i hav finally written 1 love poem
not gr8 though like yours but ma best attempt:neutral:
February 21st, 2006 at 12:56 pm
Kunal Goel says:
aditya you should join speakeasy. the official forum of this blog. click here
February 21st, 2006 at 10:26 pm
Neha says:
I cant imagine a 12 yr old writing stuff like that. she’s got to be a prodigy!
March 17th, 2006 at 12:55 pm
Kunal Goel says:
yes she is. sigh.
March 17th, 2006 at 02:38 pm