December 27th, 2005
Half Minute Of Love
Note: Odd lines by girl, even by boy.
Can half a minute save your life?
Hey ten seconds would do!
Come on you surely don’t mean that.
I’m sure it’s not untrue.
It costs a lot, long distance does.
For three rupees my life?
Oh don’t be such a drama king!
Only if love was rife.
I will call you, but just for you.
Oh please don’t tell me that!
Oh go to hell what do you want?
What you want; I can bet.
Well I’ll call you in a minute or two.
Oh thanks for being so good!
But learn to live your life alone…
If you were here I could.
-K.
Tags: Poetry, Long Distance Love, Common Metre
Neha says:
Hmmm. Thanks for nothing.
December 27th, 2005 at 01:05 pm
K. says:
welcome for nothing.
December 27th, 2005 at 01:30 pm
Neha says:
and all the people who didnt know… the girl in this is supposed to be me. K…. You are a creep.
December 27th, 2005 at 01:53 pm
K. says:
someone is laughing and i’m gonna punch that bastard hard.
December 27th, 2005 at 01:57 pm
Neha says:
And just for the record… i hope you are listening K. ‘im mean and selfish’
December 27th, 2005 at 02:29 pm
Isaiah says:
no u r lovely and benevolent.
December 28th, 2005 at 01:05 am
Neha says:
Ishan this is really a bad time to hit on me.
December 28th, 2005 at 01:48 am
K. says:
I mean why can’t people decently comment on my works?
December 28th, 2005 at 04:57 am
Neha says:
well your work excited all these comments… and more.
December 28th, 2005 at 10:14 am
Isaiah says:
Is it? I’m sorry Neha please forgive me. But I meant it, really.
December 28th, 2005 at 06:47 pm
prislee says:
December 28th, 2005 at 11:15 pm