March 6th, 2005

Everyday Was A Sunday

Posted in K., Short stories by K.

I will call her today. First waking thought.
It has been six months.
It is a strange feeling, life goes on like nothing happened and nothing happens.
Then why should I call her today?
To ask her why did this happen and to tell her I was a fool to ever let her go.
So here goes 1* 6* 0* 1* 8* 4* 7* beep beep beep, tring-tring, tring-tring, a long tring follows.
“Hello” (With a stress on HELL) says the voice on the other end of the line.
Damn it, her father, click, bang.
Oh God! I forgot it is Sunday, his off. She won’t be able to talk today.
I waited for 6 months and 6 days and then called her on a Sunday.
How come?

-by K.

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13 comments

  1. Isaiah says:

    It still reads great! I think it has survived the true test of time.

    March 8th, 2005 at 08:55 pm

  2. Sushubh says:

    when i made that call here, she never picked up the phone :(

    March 8th, 2005 at 10:21 pm

  3. Sarika says:

    I like it. :-) Its one of ur better ones.

    March 9th, 2005 at 12:15 pm

  4. ravi says:

    very witty.the epilog is very logical and practical.
    I like it.

    March 11th, 2005 at 09:12 am

  5. crystal says:

    u have always been the best.

    March 22nd, 2005 at 03:24 pm

  6. Neha says:

    hmmm… Just thinking, whats your story… I liked this one better than the rest.

    August 9th, 2005 at 07:23 am

  7. K/. says:

    Most people like this one the best, I don’t know why.

    August 11th, 2005 at 12:54 pm

  8. chetna says:

    kunal u write good stuff man…

    October 25th, 2005 at 08:09 pm

  9. K. says:

    :smile: thanks

    October 25th, 2005 at 10:52 pm

  10. aditya says:

    do i hav to say like oder people that u r a good writer….temme if you write books….wud love to spend some of my fukins life time on that…..ur writings seem to b interesting

    February 21st, 2006 at 01:00 pm

  11. K. says:

    thanks

    February 21st, 2006 at 10:27 pm

  12. Fishy says:

    i always like your writings.

    ……i should read more of it…

    September 25th, 2008 at 11:13 am

  13. ?????? ???? ??????? says:

    your writing is very simple and superb. i can visualize the moment.
    Though I havent watched, i think that short film based on this plot should also be good.

    September 25th, 2008 at 03:52 pm

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