She loves me a lot
I could never trust myself with heights. Maya knew it very well. But still, when her boyfriend wanted to rent a flat of their own, she chose the top-most floor in some tall building having some talk-of-the-town neighbors.
High places have always scared me. They tend to corruptly use the powers, vested in them because of their status, against me. Maya is a real bitch. She makes me do things I don’t want to do. She has a way of making all her ideas sound like my very own personal thoughts. Just to beat this I bought a book called “Don’t Say Yes, When You Want To Say No”, though I can’t say how useful it was because when I was midway into it she told me that its a crap book and made me throw it away. We have a very normal relationship. I love her and my girlfriend. She loves me and her boyfriend. She treats me like a husband, always wanting to change something or the other. I treat her like a wife, ignoring her completely. Though I’m not as successful in the endeavor as her. Like when she took me to a rafting trip in Rishikesh, even if I am hell scared of water and can’t swim. As if this wasn’t enough she made me jump from a 50-feet cliff into the green waters of the Ganges cutting swiftly through the mighty black Shivaliks. I always felt that she did all these things just to make me say no, but I just couldn’t. I mean how could you refuse when she holds your hands, looks into your eyes and says, “Jump”. But that time I didn’t, I stood over the edge for nearly an eternity before I could muster up enough courage to take that step ahead.
I took such a giant leap but the darned camera refused to click. I jumped again but dang, silly thing did it again. I have always told her to seduce her boyfriend into buying her a swanky new cell-phone, which would at least carry a camera with various funny features thrown in. But she always said, they don’t have good keypads and as always, I agreed.
On that day too, I was standing naked in the balcony of her new flat and was engrossed in a game of ‘Snakes’ on her phone. She came from behind me and faintly tickled me. The only thing I never liked was being tickled. One tickle and flying went her beloved Nokia 3310, with its charming keypad, down towards the harsh walkway. Lucky no one was walking on the walkway because the old Nokia 3310 was slightly on the heavier side and could have had some damaging effects on someone’s melon.
Sadly, Maya was never the one to sees the lighter side of the things and since that moment she decided to be happy with her boyfriend. It was the only thing I did against her wishes. I think she has a new phone now and might contemplate loving me all over again.
- Ishan Dubey
Tags: Nokia 3310, love, lust, life
Isaiah says:
This is dedicated to Payal.
The one I love, not the other one.
December 15th, 2005 at 10:30 pm
Shashank Bajaj says:
Its some kind of different story which i have not read earlier but few things had happened with me like naked in a bolcony .
If u make it more romantic it would have loving one
But nice work
December 15th, 2005 at 10:51 pm
Kunal Goel says:
Shashank Bajaj’s comment is better than the story!
by the way Chetna is Maya. ok Nikunj?
December 16th, 2005 at 04:52 am
Kunal Goel says:
lemme explain a bit.
I love her and my girlfriend. She loves me and her boyfriend.
Means:
Ishan loves Chetna and Payal. Chetna loves Ishan and Nikunj.
I hope this info helps the reader in enjoying the story more.
great effort ishan!
December 16th, 2005 at 04:55 am
chetna says:
Kunal …ur crap holds no meaning…wud be better if u will keep ur perceptions with urself…y to gain sympathy all over again??!!
December 16th, 2005 at 09:01 am
chetna says:
December 16th, 2005 at 09:02 am
Kunal Goel says:
damn it’s sympathy, all over again.
December 16th, 2005 at 01:28 pm
Isaiah says:
I love her and my girlfriend. She loves me and her boyfriend.
Kunal don\\\’t say what u dont know:
Maya in this is @nish*, with whom I shared some beautiful moments in Rishikesh. @nish* actually has 2 boyfriends S*m*rth and some Sardar guy whose name is just keep forgetting. S*m*rth actually rented a flat for them in Gurgaon.
I was in love with @nish* and other girls at that time and she was in love with me and those 2 and maybe some others I dont know of.
P.S. Sardar guy was called Time-par-eat.
December 16th, 2005 at 08:45 pm
Kunal Goel says:
oh he ate on time! good good.
December 16th, 2005 at 09:03 pm
Isaiah says:
yeah kinda!!
December 16th, 2005 at 09:08 pm
sindhu says:
BEKAR…………………SORRY MAN I DIDNT LIKE IT………..
December 17th, 2005 at 12:56 am
sheldon says:
hey,
just to get some facts correct out here…
dont mind, Ishan…
see i know u, i know @nish*, i know S*m*rth, i know Time-par-eat and hell i know all about the Rishikesh Trip..
now here\\\\\\\’s the Equation…
@nish* never loved u … nor did she love Time-par-eat… She was infact not even in love with S*m*rth too…
she was a cool, freak out type of gal, who actualy flirted with anyone who wanted to flirt with her and she never gave a damn to what people though about her as long as she knew she was was not doing anything out of the way…:twisted:
and hey about the stuff u have written,.,,,
Keep it real man…:roll:
best of luck with ur next story..
waiting for it….
love and luck
sheldon…:razz:
December 17th, 2005 at 02:22 am
tw says:
hmmm wow interesting..
i wish i knew what everyone is talking about..
December 17th, 2005 at 03:06 am
Kunal Goel says:
this is a true story. ishan wrote it for payal kumar who probably won’t even read it. what a loser.
December 17th, 2005 at 04:24 am
chetna says:
ishan … Is @nish* still in? i never know that.. yeah.. i know time-par-eat.. even he is another freek who loves to flirt out … in case u wanna go for her.. better do it man..
December 17th, 2005 at 08:21 am
neha says:
ok… i have to say this…
1. This i guess is a short story. a writer can take liberties in distorting certain facts. so i think we dont really should care abt who @nish* is and whether she loved ishan or not
2. Ishan i liked your story. the initial build up is great, but it seems to me that the ending bit was a little forced.
3. Get a life guys. dont dissect someone\’s personal life over a blog that is open for all to see.
December 17th, 2005 at 12:30 pm
chetna says:
ummm…yeah i agree neha…ishan i will call u today evenin.. to discuss some urgent stuff
December 17th, 2005 at 01:22 pm
payal says:
hmph!!! i dunno know who is in love with whom but the nokia 3310 he is talking about is mine…
December 17th, 2005 at 04:32 pm
Isaiah says:
great payal tats the reason i love you.
sheldon u shud read neha\’s comment, i think she has got it perfectly right.
neha i guess u r right cos i had to bring in Nokia 3310 and couldn\’t think of anything else.
sindhu i thought u liked my concept of Maya
twinkle dont be bothered cos even i dont know what every1 is talking about
chetna do give me a call and no @nish* is not around anymore though i\’ve her number
December 17th, 2005 at 05:22 pm
Nikunj says:
Hey ishan. Thanx for asking me personally for annotations on ur story. I’ve read ur stories. I’ll be honest and would be commenting on all ur works I’ve gone through.
Except for some creations, I don’t feel that others were worth reading, primarily due to lack of a proper storyline. At times, even a proper storyline was atrophied coz it wasn’t carried well. Don’t write just for the sake of writing. Write to make people feel what u want to convey. Don’t go for quantity, go for quality. Y r u wasting such a beautiful god-gifted talent.
Another thing, it’s always preferable to write in common man’s language. Even if u’ve good command over English vocabulary, think about ur readers. Not everyone would be that proficient. U’ve to reach to masses. Don’t just be a writer. Be a good writer.
Pen is mightier than sword and u r one of the few privileged ones to possess such skills. My wishes are with u for ur future endeavors. I hope my comments would be taken in right spirits.
December 19th, 2005 at 12:04 pm
Neha says:
Wow nikunj! I love you. you wrote the exact things i felt, but couldnt say without sounding rude!!!
December 19th, 2005 at 12:33 pm
Nikunj says:
I’m forced to write another comment coz I feel that my relationship with Chetna is unnecessarily dragged in here. I feel any blog is setup to share the artististic abilities and not to meddle with anyone’s personal life. I’ve been keeping quiet for a long time now but I feel it’s time for me to say.
I love her and more than that I trust her. I know that Chetna and Ishan are good friends and nothing more, and I’m okay with it. I would really request all of you to not entertain such comments and concentrate on your writings. And since Chetna has left this blog, due to the way things shaped up, I’ll not be visiting this site anymore. I wish everyone a fantastic new year, though I feel sorry for this blog, coz it lost a wonderful writer.
Kunal, I know about ur illness and the best I can do is to pity u. Poor soul. May u get well soon.
December 19th, 2005 at 12:40 pm
Nikunj says:
Thanx neha
December 19th, 2005 at 12:49 pm
chetna says:
he is one of his kind neha…trust me.. thas y i love him too.
December 19th, 2005 at 01:05 pm
Isaiah says:
Cant say much
Neha y do u think i cant take rudeness, trust me i can.
Nikunj i take everything in right spirits be it comments or other things.
December 19th, 2005 at 03:22 pm
chetna says:
Phew!:roll:
December 19th, 2005 at 03:53 pm
Kunal Goel says:
are we having fun yet?
December 19th, 2005 at 10:50 pm
sheldon says:
hey ppl..
its me.. i’m BACK….. so whats up ppl, u are all hypocrates.,… u write sumthing and when someone commects on it u all feel that the F!@king world has come crashing down on u…
get a life ppl… life is all about critising and accepting critisism,,,,, so whats there if i wrote what i wrote… its the trutrh and i am not afraid to speak up… and hey, i am not a bit interested in screwing up ppl’s happiness or messing in their relationships… its just that i DONT take shit…
thats just me…
rest is for u ppl to decide…
take care and have fun…. and hey all u ppl who think about leaving this blog… comeon, if u cant accept what ppl write, then i guess u shoulf not be a part of a blog…..
pay heed and be good.
hope to get a good story soon, and hey i dont mind FICTION.:idea::shock::twisted:
hey chetna, no offence to u gal, and hey ishan, u know me buddy… jus a plain lil gag man.
dont get all hyper bout such trivial stuff.
as the saying goes,
lil thinks always happen in this big bad world…
sheldon.
December 20th, 2005 at 01:54 am
sheldon says:
and hey, since i will be away on vacation…
Wishing all u ppl. a “MERYRY X’MAS AND A HAPPY AND JOYOUS NEW YEAR”
take care anf have fun, and may this new year bring luck and prosperiety to all of u .
may god bless and keep u all in the best of health.
love and luck in the new yesr to all of u .
see ya all soon.
sheldon.:grin:
December 20th, 2005 at 01:59 am
Kunal Goel says:
thx for the wishes sheldon
December 20th, 2005 at 03:01 am
Prashant(-_-) says:
hey,
So ishu this is dedicated to Payal …
yaar atleast tell me wen u change ur gfrnd…
by the way story is good for
non-understandable guys…
December 20th, 2005 at 04:58 pm
Isaiah says:
Thanks prashant.
All the wishes to all of u.
Enjoy the vacations sheldon.
December 20th, 2005 at 08:47 pm
Neha says:
Ishan, I do not really care if you can take rudeness or not, but I know that being rude is out of my power.
December 21st, 2005 at 12:36 pm
Shashank Bajaj says:
So the real story starts with response n wat was up written by Ishan
January 11th, 2006 at 12:47 am
Isaiah says:
Man! the last comment by one Mr. Shashank Bajaj was so good that I cudn’t resist commenting on his comment, even though it is coming in rather late.
June 26th, 2006 at 01:21 am
Isaiah says:
In case any one of u r wondering on the name changes in the comments.
Yes, I\\\\\\\’m talking about this Time-par-eat thing.
So he called me today and asked me to delete the blog. Yes, delete the entire f@*king blog.
So I said, that wud not be possible ask for something else.
So he asked me to remove the comments containing his name.
I was polite but firm, and refused this request as well.
Then he started becoming angry and all and said I better do somthing or he\\\\\\\’ll screw up my life and wat not and tat he is so n so and can do such n such.
This got be scared. Yes, I was shit scared.
But then I asked, how in the hell did he ever get to read this blog(I mean, ok, but lets face it; no one in their sane minds wud com visiting on this blog).
So he said some one searched his name on the Google and this was the first result that came and it was adorning him with names such as \\\\\\\’freek\\\\\\\’(yes, we dont care much about speeling on our blog, do we?)
So I promised to do something about it and here I am changing his name ti Time-par-eat and writing this comment.
Yes, there is nothing worse than someone searching ur name on Google n the first result directs him to our site. Its worse than being found dead in your loo with your pants down and shit all over your face.
July 3rd, 2006 at 02:55 am
Isaiah says:
this i wrote at very late in the early morning so dint pay much too heed to sentence forms and grammer and spellings but i think that i had spelled speelings right earlier but than to you all got the point did not you???
July 3rd, 2006 at 03:00 am
Isaiah says:
Hey everyone,
Just got a call from this @nish* girl as well, she too was very pissed off about this whole stuff. She too threatend to put me behind bars though she complimented me on this creation saying it was a ‘marvellous creation’.
So here I am removing everyone’s name.
I guess, it was not such a good idea to write real names. I’d better stick to Lallan, Raju, Meena, Seema and the likes.
July 7th, 2006 at 07:39 pm
distant fellow says:
amazing story,, I did like the story,
well i know none of the people hwo have given their comments here,, but 2 me the story was great,, infact , the going down of cell phon ean dguys coming out from that relationship,, relationship of slavery,, i liked that. keep it up.
regards
distant dream
August 2nd, 2006 at 08:33 pm
Isaiah says:
Thank you distant fellow.
August 3rd, 2006 at 02:11 pm