Comments on: Sleeping Gods

By: Talia

Talia — Sat, 13 May 2006 19:29:50 +0000

a bit late to comment i guess… but just recently discovered this… i like the fluidity of the poem…. and the subject matter… special.

By: shambhu nath

shambhu nath — Fri, 10 Feb 2006 04:00:36 +0000

Shreeman ji/shreemati ji
mai bhee sahitya premi hoo, our mai bhee hindi/bhoupuri me kavitaaye our geet likhataa hoo,

By: Amit

Amit — Sat, 03 Dec 2005 17:02:17 +0000

learning:?:

By: Neha

Neha — Sat, 03 Dec 2005 14:50:48 +0000

Amit, I guess you havent met all the people in the world. you should try to. it could be a learning experience.

By: Amit

Amit — Fri, 02 Dec 2005 18:58:53 +0000

:!:neha liking and disliking something( especially writing) are not dependent on what u r.

By: chetna

chetna — Fri, 02 Dec 2005 09:27:56 +0000

ummmm….i will consider that..

By: Neha

Neha — Fri, 02 Dec 2005 05:40:09 +0000

I like the use of nature as a medium to all that you write, being a staunch environmentalist, i cant do anything but like it. The use of words is good. But really You write a lot better in Hindi. The idea you want to convey is beautiful but there is no consistency in the rhyming pattern. so i will totally have to agree with Kunal and Mark. My advice to you, dont attempt to rhyme. if it has to, it will come on its own. The attempt can be seen and that distracts one from the beauty of the thoughts.

By: chetna

chetna — Fri, 02 Dec 2005 02:39:37 +0000

than call me…

By: Isaiah

Isaiah — Thu, 01 Dec 2005 18:59:29 +0000

i wud rather comment on the poem over the phone.

By: Amit

Amit — Thu, 01 Dec 2005 15:11:19 +0000

chetan its good ( but personally what i think first two paras are better than the last two) still keep up the good work.