No Punctuation
a very many things have happened since i saw her last i think its been over a decade every morning i go out the place where she catches her school bus from then in the time after the noon i go out to look out for her school drop this thing happens i dont know why but for all these years i just couldnt find myself at the same time as her which inadvertantly resulted in our not meeting thats the reason i believe i am always late everywhere or maybe the cause causes the effect after this in the evenings i go into all the playfieds to catch a glimpse of her playing with her friends but same old thing happens once a more so this was what was the routine until today today i saw her coming alongwith her mates i rushed across hurriedly to meet her but but she had already left
-Ishan Dubey
cry-stal says:
thats a wonderful story
February 15th, 2005 at 12:23 am
fred says:
ya i liked it too.
February 15th, 2005 at 12:53 am
anonymous says:
wow..ur very talented…keep up the good work!!!
February 15th, 2005 at 03:07 am
grace says:
its sweet but find it incomplete!reflects innocence
February 15th, 2005 at 10:52 pm
yash says:
Nice imagination!!! There should have been a proper end to the story(as i feel).
February 16th, 2005 at 01:28 pm
Oscar wilde says:
what is this crap man ? ? ?
February 17th, 2005 at 02:07 pm
Sushubh says:
o_O Sir Oscar Wilde commented here on this Blog!
February 17th, 2005 at 02:17 pm
fred says:
your gay oscar wilde
February 18th, 2005 at 02:13 am
maitraye says:
good one keep it u..
May 26th, 2005 at 12:44 pm
anonymous says:
no sense…no purpose to this story…
November 15th, 2005 at 12:02 am
Neha says:
its very juvenile ishan.
March 17th, 2006 at 12:06 pm
? says:
its hideous!!!!!!!!!!
November 9th, 2006 at 04:12 pm
Isaiah says:
Yeah! I know its nearly a crime.
November 9th, 2006 at 10:10 pm
Sheikha says:
I’m quite pleased with myself for having read this piece in the continuous flow that it was written without fumbling
November 10th, 2006 at 11:45 pm