November 5th, 2005
Lovemaking
Stark Crazy. Raving mad. Or is it not? You do not know. But it feels good. Free falling. You write so much about it. Abysses. Your favourites. At all times. Extra Efforts. Amazing. One worded sentences. Single nodded conversations.
Free Falling. Luring Smiles. Warm Sighs. Patronizing Glances. Cool wind on your face. Smuggled Stances. Glazed Glances. Stopped Clockwork. Faltering Moments. Fingers on your lips. Hands on your shoulders. Pulling you. Letting go.
Whispering Winds. Bellowing Silences. Reverberating moans. Psychedelic rhapsodies. Resonating heaves. Endless lovemaking with the cosmic vibrations…
Its wonderful to be here today…
-Neha
Tags: silence, music, love, cosmos, free falling
Kunal Goel says:
you are in love girl, you are in love
November 6th, 2005 at 12:58 am
Neha says:
Yeah. i think i am kunal…
November 8th, 2005 at 09:41 pm
Arun says:
hmm… this thing doest get meh
November 8th, 2005 at 10:25 pm
harsh says:
corner of your hips, eclipse.
great stuff !
good going girl !
November 9th, 2005 at 10:38 pm
Kunal Goel says:
At the corner of your lips is the orbit of your hips Eclipse
November 10th, 2005 at 03:59 am
chetna says:
neha i liked it…needs a lovely heart to pen down these feelings…keep it up
November 21st, 2005 at 06:58 pm
Neha says:
Thanks Chetna
November 22nd, 2005 at 02:55 pm
Ankur says:
Dil kush hua hai manzilen viran dek kar, ki mere tara tera bhi khana kharab hai….lol….LOVE !!!
December 23rd, 2005 at 11:23 am
Neha says:
Whatever you wanted to say ankur… i didnt get it
thanks anyway
December 23rd, 2005 at 02:10 pm
Ankur says:
mirza galib saheb….is crying on ur comments….I tried to make u feel sooo close to me….lol…
December 27th, 2005 at 02:29 pm
DeEp says:
fully agreed wid chetna , it sure needs a beautiful heart
January 18th, 2006 at 11:51 pm
doctorhoda says:
well…. u hv a versatile visualisation power… i admit… no wonder y i do visualise d same tht u do…let the fire evaporate d galaxy.. booooom
February 2nd, 2006 at 10:09 pm
Shiv Jata Shankar says:
Beta, I have never been more proud of you. “Bellowing Silences…, Reverberating moans, Faltering moments, resonating heaves…” Excellent work… The beauty of these words cannot be fathomed. If your Grandmother had read this, she would have been very proud too. You are a joy my child. I am proud to be your grandfather. Keep it up. All the best for all your future endeavours. and Im grateful that you introduced me to this side of yours that I never knew…
March 17th, 2006 at 01:50 am
dream says:
lol
oops.
March 21st, 2006 at 12:27 am
dream says:
That’s because I have nothing ‘left’ to say.
March 21st, 2006 at 12:28 am
Neha says:
that means you say everything ‘right’?
March 21st, 2006 at 11:09 am
dream says:
Seems like if you say everything ‘right’, you have more of a chance to be right.
And when all you say is right, then what’s left? Who would care for ‘left’?
~~~~~
It’s a nice prose, Neha. I like it.
March 21st, 2006 at 04:46 pm
Neha says:
hmmm. I think not many do care for left…
March 21st, 2006 at 05:11 pm
dream says:
lol, that shows how much you have left to say!
March 21st, 2006 at 10:44 pm
Neha says:
i have to agree there’s not much. there wasnt much to begin with.
March 21st, 2006 at 11:06 pm
dream says:
Most of the times in life, there isn’t much.
March 27th, 2006 at 05:31 pm
Sarika says:
wow neha i can see u have posted so many blogs keep it up sweety
May 18th, 2006 at 11:32 pm
Sheikha says:
I like this fragmented style of writing, like jigsaw puzzles…
November 10th, 2006 at 02:28 am